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Delise Fantome's avatar

I love a good piece of flash fiction, and i love introspective work so this is a double whammy of good to me. Damn shame how relatable this is.

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A Dope Black Girl With Anxiety's avatar

🥹 tysm for reading!

…I enjoyed writing this - it was a way to explore themes and self creatively. I may have to do this again!

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alex b.'s avatar

Damn I love this!!!! Bars on bars on bars!!! I'm saving this one.

Powerful. Painful reminders to never let a mf play in your face ever again. This is a testimony of someone that's tired tired. There is so much to unpack and I don't even know where to start. I'm gonna keep coming back to this.

Reading this hurts because it's so relatable as I'm going through my own battles that bring me to my knees...but your story is deeply felt. What's remains when everyone has used me up? How do I keep myself whole after I've been chipped away? Too many questions. Yeah - I'll share that story with you another day.

I'm always moved by your pieces. You stepped away for minute and came back stronger! So proud of you.❤️‍🔥

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A Dope Black Girl With Anxiety's avatar

🥹🥹🥹 OMG! Don't make me cry! This is such a major compliment because I didn't even know what flash fiction was until I came across your works.

I have always loved Marvel and the intricate themes and nuances in the characters and comics - so, I'm floored that those things came through the piece. This was hard but I enjoyed it! 😅

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NitroFairyWing's avatar

Now why I thought I posted on this and didn't 😂😂

This was an interesting like read, I can see this as a movie fr 👀

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Badiana Badio Eckstrom's avatar

This is Beautiful! I love the nod to Marvel too. I can be wordy with my comments. But absolutely beautiful sums this up!

Happy to see you back and sharing your words again!

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